At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays due to the low mortality rate, the number of older people are continuously decreasing while, the number of younger adults are rapidly increasing. The disparity is so vast, that, the young comprise a major part of the population in some countries. This trend is advantageous as the youth are considered to be the backbone of any countries economy.
To begin with, young adults are more adaptable to change and are up to date with the latest technology. In other words, they do not shy away from taking risks and are always on the hunt for newer technology in order to get the work done efficiently. Next, the pension given to the older generation is very menial and are not on par to meet the current expenses. Hence, they rely heavily on healthcare as opposed to the young. To elucidate, the USA drains billions in maintaining their ageing population. On the other hand, Singapore invests their money in the younger generation to make them job ready. Therefore, having a large number of young adults are beneficial to the countries economy.
Nevertheless, there are some downside to having too many young adults. Firstly, their over dependence on technology instead of using manpower may cause acute job shortage. Those who are not up to speed with the latest development may lose their jobs and result in a rise in unemployment. Secondly, if the young have too much power they can make changes in the policies which in turn may adversely affect the older people. However, with proper research and studies a crises can be avoided. For instance, a doctors job cannot be completely overtaken by technology and needs to have a human touch. In the same way, if policies are formulated by considering the repercussions then they can prove to be beneficial in the long run.
In conclusion, the pros far outweigh the cons. Although, older people are needed to guide the young, they prove to be redundant beyond a point. Conversely, countries that have a relatively large number of young adults are more technologically sound and successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...re considered to be the backbone of any countries economy. To begin with, young adults...
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Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... make them job ready. Therefore, having a large number of young adults are beneficial to the coun...
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...r of young adults are beneficial to the countries economy. Nevertheless, there are som...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'downsides'?
Suggestion: downsides
...conomy. Nevertheless, there are some downside to having too many young adults. Firstl...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cris', 'a crise', 'a crisis' or simply 'crises'?
Suggestion: a cris; a crise; a crisis; crises
...wever, with proper research and studies a crises can be avoided. For instance, a doctors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93063583815 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78427372212 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1127276385 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.35 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259106275958 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726396582518 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780290479617 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18019660119 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826774609713 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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