The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The line graph provides information about the use of water by different sectors over the world between 1900 and 2000, while the table gives data on water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
Overall, it can be seen that the amount of water was used by Agriculture was dominant, whereas Domestic sector used the lowest amount of water. And water consumption in Brazil was far higher than the Congo.
Looking at the line chart in more detail, it is clear that use of water by Agriculture stood at around 500 km3 in 1900. Water use by this sector grew steadily and it crossed 1000 km3 in 1950. Then, the amount of water which was used for agricultural needs increased dramatically and it reached at around 3000km3 in 2000, which was the highest point on the chart. On the other hand, water use by industrial sector and domestic sector started at only 1 km3 and 2 km3 respectively in 1900. The use of water for these sectors remained constant at their initial value until 1950. Then, there was a slight increase of water use in domestic sector reaching to about 100 km3 in the final year . Similarly, water use by industrial sector increased abruptly to around 800 km3.
Moving on to the table, it is evident that 359 m3 of water was consumed by per person in Brazil, as compared to 8 m3 in Congo. In Congo , just 100 m2 land was irrigated by water whereas in Brazil it was 26,500 km2.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs increased" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'increasing' or 'to be increased'.
Suggestion: increasing; to be increased
...r which was used for agricultural needs increased dramatically and it reached at around 3...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her hand, water use by industrial sector and domestic sector started at only 1 km...
^^
Line 5, column 686, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ching to about 100 km3 in the final year . Similarly, water use by industrial sect...
^^
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., as compared to 8 m3 in Congo. In Congo , just 100 m2 land was irrigated by water...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, so, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3833697491 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6101418743 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314688477674 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143358027544 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892440760269 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227414489454 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119751555661 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs increased" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'increasing' or 'to be increased'.
Suggestion: increasing; to be increased
...r which was used for agricultural needs increased dramatically and it reached at around 3...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her hand, water use by industrial sector and domestic sector started at only 1 km...
^^
Line 5, column 686, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ching to about 100 km3 in the final year . Similarly, water use by industrial sect...
^^
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., as compared to 8 m3 in Congo. In Congo , just 100 m2 land was irrigated by water...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, so, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3833697491 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6101418743 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314688477674 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143358027544 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892440760269 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227414489454 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119751555661 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.