An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development
Nowadays changing occupations or accommodations have become a tendency among the population. From my perspective, this phenomenon may bring both the benefit and drawbacks to each individual and the whole society
On the one hand, there is a variety of positive effects that changing jobs or residences have. First of all, this transformation may accelerate one's career path. It is undoubtedly true that people these days have more job opportunities due to the development of mass media and other sources of information such as the social network. Consequently, people moving to a different enterprise with the aim of extra income or having a more suitable position has happened more frequently. In the second place, it gave them an opportunity to meet and to make brand-new friends from other areas. Since urban citizens prefer living alone or in a nuclear family rather than in a large family group, there is far more effortlessly to changing the address. Furthermore, there are also numerous affairs required flexibility in the dwelling. The translation profession, which often works oversea, can be a good case in point. In that circumstance, changing accommodation can be a good way to commuting more conveniently
Nevertheless, the drawbacks of this trend should not be underestimated. First of all, the excessive changing of residents may be notably costly and time-consuming. There seem to be shreds of evidence that moving to a new place took people a great deal of time to utterly transfer the domestic furniture and to get on well with neighbors. Another negative effect is that it can be quite stressful. Separating from the familiar workplace or habitation is not a pleasant activity and it can be even more traumatic when the new working environment is not live up to the expectation. This is shown by several newcomers struggle to harmonize with other colleagues and partners
To sum up, changing the workplace or accommodation may boost the career path and gave people a chance to make friends. However, it simultaneously can be quite costly and stressful, especially when the new place does not live up to the expectation
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, such as, first of all, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15186246418 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13871443629 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567335243553 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9943356166 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165629392369 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496996553946 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259615111857 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982497644774 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050588552948 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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