some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. others argue that customers should avoid buying with a lot of packaging.
discuss both views and give your own opinions
While some people believe that reducing the amount of packaging is retailers' and suppliers' responsibility, others think that avoiding buying things with plastic bags is customers' responsibility. This essay will discuss above mentioned perceptions with a company of personal ideas.
On the one hand, producers and companies have to reduce the amount of packaging as much as possible and have a significant responsibility for limiting it. Firstly, almost customers have a lack of environmental awareness and using packaging that affect negatively on environment. Therefore, supermarkets and suppliers have to limit the number of packaging that they use for their business. However, manufacturers and producers can replace plastic bags with recyclable and environmentally friendly which easily do people use foe a lone time.
On the contrary, each people need to have a responsibility of protecting environment by controlling their way of using unfriendly containers. Our fellows can suggest manufacturers and supermarkets making a mass of packaging faded by composing pressure on their think. For supermarkets' business, customers' benefits are their priority. As the result, companies must be environmentally responsible for their business. Servicing places such as supermarkets or retailers can be requested by customers for reducing a mass of packaging.
In conclusion, individuals and retailers both must be environmentally responsible for protecting the world from being destroyed and damage. this is also be the responsibility of the governments to compose tax on plastic bags heavily and educate people about raising environmental awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86307053942 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47283322123 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8648549734 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280890952743 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101825723786 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655074586606 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173135472751 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757019007276 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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