Q1
The reading passage state that, four days work in the week is good idea for increasing the profits of companies. However, the professor in the lecture casts doubt on the points express in the passage.
First, the reading consider that fewer hours work is so effective and increase performance of employees and reduce the rate of errors, in contrast, the professor contradicts the idea and further explains that the protype with this view can't makes cost less and in addition, this idea need more money as a additional costs like training, medicine, off space, etc.
Second, the reading claims that decrease in the incoming of employees can help that remaining money spend for hiring more staff admittedly, the speaker justified the information presented in the article and make point that this idea is unpleasant for workers because they probably think it is not fair and in this atmosphere efficiency will fall.
Third, the author in reading puts forward that the idea can reducing rate of unemployment in society, on the other hand, the speaker validates the point and adds that this approach has some risks and maybe its harm be more than its advantage and also this idea force some costs for supervision of employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...xplains that the protype with this view cant makes cost less and in addition, this i...
^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... addition, this idea need more money as a additional costs like training, medicin...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9756097561 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49331766058 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 21.2450331126 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.627821357 49.2860985944 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.0 110.228320801 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 21.698381199 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.6 7.06452816374 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.3589403974 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.0289183223 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.498013245 175% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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