In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
Parents in some American states make sure their teenagers do not step out late at night unless a guardian or an adult accompanies them. In my opinion, a 'curfew' is the correct measure adopted by concerned families to make sure their youngsters do not mix with lousy peer groups or endanger their lives by exposing themselves to the harmful elements of the society.
Teenagers are impressionable youngsters. Therefore, it becomes imperative to have rules laid for them. Firstly, by making sure that the children do not leave their house after a particular time safeguards them from the wrong company of other youngsters, who might either be rebellious in nature or could be doing drugs. Additionally, teenagers from good homes will not defy their parent's rules and stay out late. Accompanying mother or father would make sure that they are safe and surrounded by a positive peer group. Secondly,crimes against children during their teenage years have risen exponentially. Several kidnappings had taken place when the children were alone. For example, a few years ago, a newspaper article reported how a 16-year-old boy sneaked out of his parent's house in Sacramento and, eventually killed. It ought to become mandatory for youngsters to abide by the rules of not stepping out after a stipulated time; otherwise, such heinous crimes would never stop.
To sum it up, keeping our children safe should be our priority and a curfew seems to be the best step towards it. Telling their children to be home by eight and to chaperone them where ever necessary, keeps them protected. Therefore, I hope that parents abide by these rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97192982456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.769072478 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5745210375 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19317041123 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063665279393 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711031141044 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110470004148 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454050723606 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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