The Chart Below shows the milk export figures from three European countries between 2008 and 2012. Task 1 essay (a barchat).
This following essay gives information about the milk export figures among three European countries between 2008 and 2012. Now, I am going to describe completely.
Overall, we can see the result of exporting milk among Italy, Russian and Poland between 2008 and 2012.The interesting fact that in 2010 the percentage of Russian increased to 40 millions of tonnes. It means the climax point.
On the one hand, in 2008 the percentage of Italy was more than 15 millions of tonnes and about Russian we can see that was nearby 25 millions. But the proportion of Italy was too low. Actually 12 millions. In the next years there is no big changes in degrees of Italy. Moreover, the proportion of Russian was increased year by year. In additionally, the level of Poland has too decreased in 2010 than 2008.
On the other hand, in 2011 and 2012 the percentage of Russian began to fall dawn, but the rate of Poland has increased with a little changes. Thus, the proportion of Russian was dominated and it still going on to dominate.
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...8 the percentage of Italy was more than 15 millions of tonnes and about Russian we can see tha...
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... has too decreased in 2010 than 2008. On the other hand, in 2011 and 2012 the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, moreover, so, still, thus, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82513661202 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61600857243 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4512735277 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9230769231 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178241876381 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544521287052 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122507923086 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113616386586 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140737144031 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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