The rise of the convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. So the advantage outweighs the disadvantages.
Technology in the recent time has not only changed the wardrobe of the people but also has drastically changed the eating habits, by replacing the homemade food with the pre-cooked, ready-made food, which helps them to keep pace with modernization. The opinion about the advantages and disadvantages varies from person to person, but I have a viewpoint that they have more advantages.
The revolution in the field of food has changed the dining style of the people by providing them the numerous options for food as per their choice. Making food at home is a quite time-consuming process, but time perhaps recognized as the most important nowadays and this the most overwhelming advantage of the pre-cooked food. Though, this has worked well for the working generation has been benefitted a lot from this pre-cooked food, especially for those who are living away from their family for study or work. Nowadays, as the life of every individual has become much occupied hence, they try to stick to the diet which helps them to be active and stick to the processed food which passed the standard health test of the government, instead of homemade oily food which is mostly noticed as a responsible agent for major health issues, such a rise in cholesterol level, heart attack.
There are certain disadvantages also reckoned by people such as traditional cooking methods are losing their faces. Earlier families used to sit together while eating food and discuss various aspects of life, as it was considered as family time. Moreover, homemade food is much healthier than the pre-cooked food which has led to the most weight gaining problem such as obesity, because it has more concentrated fats in it. Furthermore, they have added preservatives and additives to prevent spoilage, and some of them are cancer-causing.
To conclude, as per the pace of modernization is concerned, time plays a major role and hence, the advantages of readymade food overshadow the disadvantage of these.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08895705521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86380374669 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3762003995 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.818181818 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202322501519 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775255108519 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521459720675 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136669075754 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428458479923 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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