Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as goverments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other effects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the advancement of state standards of our living habits and globalized world, our planet has become so accessible interdependent that one small shift in any part of the globe can have enormous consequences on the rest of the humanity. A newly discovered Covid-19 (Coronavirus) remaining as the most challenging hurdle that human beings faced once in thousand years. A great part of the world has been struggling from unusual contagious disease causing the death of thousands of people and raising a huge amount of economic losses while tens of thousands of lives have been saved due to reduced air pollution during coronavirus lockdowns. This essay sheds light on both points before stating my personal viewpoint.
To begin with, a few months ago precisely on December 31, China alerted World Health Organization (WHO) to several cases of unusual pneumonia in Wuhan, a port city of 11 million people in central Hubei province. The newly discovered virus COVID-19 spread quickly among Wuhan. Most countries underestimated its effect and did not want to lend a hand to the continent. Yet, when it started to spread to almost all countries starting from Thailand, Japan, US, Nepal, France, Australia, Malaysia, Singapore, South Korea and etc. they all decided to unite their medical experiences and pause the threat. Currently, almost all countries have been fighting with a new virus asking their local population to stay at home and working hard to find an appropriate vaccine to the virus.
On the other hand, the coronavirus pandemic is shutting down countries across the world, causing a significant decline in air pollution in major cities as countries implement stricter quarantines and travel restrictions. Dramatic reduction is witnessed in the amount of harmful greenhouse gas emissions in the atmosphere. Thousands of lives have been saved in China since the coronavirus outbreak started, claim scientists, saying lockdowns have dramatically improved air quality. Across the globe countries are implemented measures to restrict public interactions including closing pubs, cancelling events and encouraging home working. Limiting travel has led to a reduction in vehicle emissions and cutting the amount of industrial activity has led to a drop in the number of harmful particles put in the air.
Both points considered, unexpected appearance of a new virus staggered people and at the same time the world we are living in. Even if it is taking the lives of thousands, reviving atmosphere tends to give a new life to millions in the future of human beings. As we first make our habits, and then our habits make us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, while, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26059322034 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02907648148 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58686440678 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.7317704189 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.684210526 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8421052632 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294492210627 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809816386132 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141634879062 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163962896713 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.253074773333 0.056905535591 445% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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