In some schools, students must study music and learn to play a musical instrument. In other schools, studying music may not be required or there may be no music classes at all. Do you think all students should have to study music? Support your opinion with reasons and examples.
In this day and age, people usually have different views about the matter that whether students should learn music or not in their class time.Some think that music subject and musical intrument are one of the compulsory subjects in the school. Contrarily ,it is thought that taking up music may not be requested or it may be no essential to have music classes at all.According to me, I suppose that music subject not too necessary for all students to learn.
On the one hand, music is one of intriguing minor subject bringing all students a relaxation and sense of entertaining beside main subjects.When students frequently have to face many difficult main subjects and find a way out to deal with them, music is considered to help them have some comfortable periods in their class.Like for instance,math is defined as a hard subject for almost students.In order to firgure out the method to solve assignments in math,er, they spend a large amount of time to do it.Therefore, playing a musical instrument or learning music are the ways so as to make them take the chill pill and perhaps release their stress and tension.
On the other hand, studying music should not be obligatory for all students in some school in virtue of having different benefits over disavantages. Instead of focusing music or musical instrument,some of schools should be emphasisng on main subjects like math, english or history..etc.... simply because those subjects play an important role in learning of students so as to help students to have stable knowledge so that they could prepare for their university path in the future.In addition to that,music is only a tool enable them distract main subjects rather than giving their best shot to tackle some math assignments or practicing some crucial skills in english.Moreover,music should be an optional subjects for students.If they have a thing for music or playing musical instrument,The school could organize some extracurricular music lessons for them to study .Apart from they have a knack for feeling the music or playing musical intrument or singing well, there are some students being simply tone deaf and reading musical note really put a strain on them.
In conclusion,each one has it own perks.According to my knowledge,I believe that it is not essential to require students to take up playing any musical intrument or music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08205128205 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0369410888 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517948717949 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 247.508400187 49.4020404114 501% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.142857143 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.7142857143 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5714285714 7.06120827912 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526250707998 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317065727191 0.084324248473 376% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813512494373 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343433962888 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12069215733 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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