Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
In this day and age, with the development of the world, animal rights is more cared about with every passing day, hundreds of animal welfare and support organizations have been established. For this reason, the question whether wild animals and birds are receiving too much investments has drawn more and more attentions from the public. To my perspective, the mentioned idea should be rejected and below is an essay clarifying my viewpoint.
To begin with, there are a myriad of reasons why wild animals and birds deserve to be protected. Firstly, undomesticated beings play an indispensable ecological role which ensure the quality of human living environment. Wild animal is a part of biosphere, correspondingly, protecting wild animals and birds is exceedingly vital to keep the ecosystem balanced. Secondly, wild animals are used in important scientific researches and many key medical discoveries involved experimentations on undomesticated animals. In the bodies of some kinds of wild animals contain much of valuable chemical substance, which attend to make up new special cancerous medicines.
Apart from the concerns expressed above, I also believe that the survival of uncultivated animals and birds contribute to the national agriculture. Farmers are using wild birds to kill insects, which destroy the crops. On occasions, wild birds are alternative methods which replace pesticides, a more costly and toxic approach. Therefore, we should devote more attention to the protection of wildlife.
To sum up, investing on prevention wild animals and birds' extinction is a compulsory action to protect the daily life of ourselves. The national authority also shloud raise the people's awareness of protecting wildlife.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...have been established. For this reason, the question whether wild animals and birds are receiving to...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ild animals and birds are receiving too much investments has drawn more and more att...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a myriad' or simply 'myriads'?
Suggestion: a myriad; myriads
...viewpoint. To begin with, there are a myriads of reasons why wild animals and birds d...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ational authority also shloud raise the peoples awareness of protecting wildlife.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54716981132 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10947975786 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8643625608 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286118744814 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924840647352 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595867968478 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162082945143 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248876627445 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.