Q: The news media have too much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that these days news media such as televisions, computers or smartphones has exerted enormous effects on human society. Despite the positive side of it, I personally agree with those who believe this is a largely negative trend.
The major benefit of the growth in the influence of news media is the transmission of information. Thanks to the advances in technology, news has been delivered or broadcast all over the world at ease. In fact, there are a multitude of local and national 24-hour news channels or websites offering wide news coverage from weather, sports events to politics. This implies that people can effortlessly access up-to-the-minute news, which helps them keep abreast of current affairs. This, therefore, is advantageous for those who want to get updated to daily events.
However, this advantage is outweighed by the negative aspects. First, since some journalists want to grab the headlines, they can publish shocking but inaccurate news. For instance, during coronavirus outbreak, there were a huge amount of fake news about this pandemic like the wrong number of positive cases or deaths. Consequently, this misleading information can cause confusion and worry among society. Second, it is apparent that with cameras almost everywhere, people have to suffer from invasion of privacy. This means that they bear the risk of leaking their personal or confidential images, which poses a threat to their lives.
In conclusion, the influences of news media on the daily lives of people prove overwhelmingly negative despite some obvious benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
It is true that these days news media such as televisions, compute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.348 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228132327 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9449393665 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249638624687 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806101247603 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546341001978 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160382588182 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447510321906 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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