A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him in his country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter request advice about a gift for his/her family, ask about activities and clothing and find out about the food. Write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
I am very delight full to receive an invitation letter from you. I still cherish our friendship and I will never forget the time we have spent in a vibrant city Delhi of India. I am so excited to meet you again in your country England. Since, I have not been there before, so I would like to get some knowledge from you regarding that.
To begin with, I want you to give me advice for the gift that I can get for your family. I don’t have any idea about the weather will be like in London as I am planning to come in next month. Moreover, give me detailed information of the activities that we can perform and have some great fun as well as provide me some suggestions for the dresses that will be suitable and comfortable to wear. Apart from this, as you know I am vegetarian, so I want to make sure that appropriate food will be available for me to eat.
Please write me back as soon as possible so that I can get ready my air tickets and packing beforehand,
I cannot wait to see you again.
With love,
Susan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...spent in a vibrant city Delhi of India. I am so excited to meet you again in your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, apart from, you know, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24120603015 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35813892111 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6514737173 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244424672301 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981119446335 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628590226165 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135006617257 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778339721999 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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