Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common.
Sickness caused by overstress is becoming alarming. This essay will discuss the two main causes of stress-related illness which are unlimited working hours and fewer vacations. This essay will suggest the two main solutions to these problems, they are limited working hours and more vacations
People are stressed out due to excessive working hours and little or no holidays to cool off the stress.people work more than their normal working hours so they can pay up their bills in that process they forget to give themselves a break. For example, traders in Nigeria work so hard that they forget to look after themselves, leading them to die of sickness due to stress. It has been discovered that 40% of people in Nigeria die due to overstress.
People can ease off stress by having a limited working hours and making out time for vacations. A human body is not a machine, even a machine needs a break or it shuts down likewise a human body. Therefore, vacations is a way of easing off stress from work. For example, a worker can take a break from work to travel and hang out with friends. In life, there is time for everything. There is time for work and time to take a break.
In conclusion, The increment is stress-related sickness is becoming mutual. This essay discussed how stress is often caused by unlimited working hours and fewer vacations. This essay suggested that the solutions to this problem are limited working hours and more vocations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80079681275 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61279869799 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486055776892 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.1984110232 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0714285714 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136805746786 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638863881956 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843227890445 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988993640041 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475551608689 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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