The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The tables reveal the information regarding the amount of money in millions of euros spent on Fairtrade coffee and bananas in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in two separate years, 1999 and 2004
It is clear from the tables that the amount of coffee and bananas consumed increased over the period shown, except the fact that the sales of Fairtrade bananas in Belgium and Sweden declined slightly. Overall, the sales figure of coffee in the UK was the largest increase.
In 1999, the amount of money earned from selling Fairtrade labelled coffee in Switzerland saw the highest rate of uplift in sale volumes, with 3 million euros while the figure for that in Sweden was the lowest, roughly 0.8 million.Besides that, in five year's time, there was a dramatic acceleration in the sales of coffee in the UK, approximately 15 times compared to 1999.
According to the second table, the UK topped the list of the sales of bananas labelled Fairtrade in both years 1999 and 2004 accounting for 15 million euros and 47 million euros respectively.Meanwhile, there was a substantial rise in the amount of money earned from selling bananas in Switzerland and Denmark. By contrast, Belgium and Sweden witnessed falls in revenue from bananas, at 0,8 and 1,1 millions respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03738317757 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9194203381 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.589970986 43.030603864 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.6 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.8 22.9334400587 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208945113491 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114032127523 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602421841207 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147261853682 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236417472119 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.2329268293 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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