The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?
In modern society, people are very much interested in using social media like Facebook, Twitter, ect. Some experts believe that the use of social media is superseding face-to-face interaction among many people. In my point of view, the downsides of social media is outweighed the advatages.
On the one hand, social networks help users connect globally effortlessly. Media technologies lift up any geographical barriers as people can interact with others people around the world. One good illustration of this is that Facebook which is the most popular social network in the world, currently has more than 3 billion users, friends are miles apart can be linked on social media to chat. Moreover, social networking sites are powerful tools to entertainment after hard working day. Funny videos, hillarious stories, photos, wishes of friends from everywhere can make you recharge your batteries.
One the other hand, the disadvantages of using social media to communicate are much more concerning. The most obvious reason is social network users are manipulated time. Because of being immersed in the virtual world, users often forget about time spent studying, playing sports or working. For instance, many people use social networks to take care of building the "perfect person" in the virtual world but forget to care for themselves in reality. In addition, people who using social media regularly, often lack communication skills. They have difficulty communicating in real life, such as using full words, accents, eyes contact or gestures.
In conclusion, the downsides of social media supplanting real interaction is outweighed the advatages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49027237354 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84706870996 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0558918808 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292096330325 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104633609679 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094233694284 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203530906601 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101707749126 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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