Owing to the fact that the internet has developed a lot, it is argued that the use of state-run libraries has become unnecessary anymore. Even though I partially agree with this idea, I believe that state-run libraries have just changed their intended use with the invention of the internet.
On the one hand, the development of the internet triggered the interest for e-books and hence, people started not to go to public libraries anymore. Unlike public libraries, it is utterly easy to reach information through one click on Google. Because of saving time and effort advantages, the internet has started to be preferred more than state-run libraries. For example, many academics are currently working at home on the computer while their counterparts in previous times used to spend the majority of their time in reading academic books in libraries.
However, it is unlikely to assert that public libraries are not needed anymore since plenty of libraries have just transformed into lecture rooms. Due to the fact that having a lecture room is also important, people have started to use public libraries for studying in lecture rooms. Even though easy access to information has been provided with the help of the internet, there are still plenty of people who suffer from finding a study room. For instance, visitors of Rotterdam Public Library in the Netherlands protested the school administration because of reducing capacity plans for the university library but their demands were only based on increasing capacity for lecture rooms, instead of books.
In conclusion, unlike previous times, public libraries are not regarded as crucial because of technological developments. Even though this argument is partially correct, it is unlikely that public libraries are going to be removed, instead one could comment that the logic of libraries has been transforming since the development of the internet.
- Due to the development of the internet public libraries are no longer necessary To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29934210526 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7663808741 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6005451965 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198849046514 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845542551372 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482211890253 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131820684281 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267332902955 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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