Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?
No one can deny that there are advantages and disadvantages about doing the same thing every time. Some people believe that is better keep doing the same thing always. However, some people prefer to practice new things. If I were to choose one, I would like to risk doing something new. I will develop these reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, both new skills and knowledges are two areas that people could improve doing new things. Nevertheless, some people do not want to take those risk in order to acquire new skills. Thus, those people continue a regular life without feel new experiences. In my case, definitely, I prefer to take the risk since I could incorporate something new in my life. For example, play the piano was a wish that I’d like to do until become older. Since I start to do it, it was so interesting and wonderful.
Second, other reason that it is recommended to do something new is because humans can discover different views about some topics. However, the main reason that people do not want to tray new experience is because they do not want change their opinion. But, If I have to give an advice, I believe that the best thing that people tray to do is listen new ideas. Thus, they can archive more viewpoints and they can rise their knowledge.
Finally, doing new things imply knowing new people. Thus, the interaction between people is one of the most important value that people can enjoy when they tray something different. I have to admit that these viewpoint have been influenced by my own experience. Few years ago, I bought a boat, but the problem was that I did not know how to sailing it. However, I decide to take some classes in order to learn how sail it, not only was the best decision that I could take because I still love sailing the boat, but also was the most important experience because I made so new friends with who continue to keep in touch.
In conclusion, for those reasons that I have mentioned above I prefer to keep learning new things instead leaving an annoying regular life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...hat is better keep doing the same thing always. However, some people prefer to practic...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this viewpoint' or 'these viewpoints'?
Suggestion: this viewpoint; these viewpoints
...mething different. I have to admit that these viewpoint have been influenced by my own experien...
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Line 4, column 589, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...ence because I made so new friends with who continue to keep in touch. In conclusi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60762942779 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43911067603 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487738419619 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7910565687 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5238095238 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440417620541 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14304097595 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908085038547 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255393816107 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109333614402 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.