Many companies be convinced by that their workers should well dressed during working hours but others think that dressing does not matter a lot as quality of work matters for employees.
Firstly, many concerns think that employees make good impression on visitors as well as they look fresh, neat elegant and well personalized if they dressed up well.Smart dressing enhance the beauty of person and catch the attention of others, senior staff also interested to meet them by their glamorous look.
secondly others think that quality of work should keep much value than the dressing. They are interested into work hard and wants to see own organization high , for that purpose they work hard and just do work work work. dressing and smart look does not matter for them and they just focus on their performance nothing else. In all these matters they forget own personality. They can not impress own bosses from their work without good dressing.
By proceeding the statement, my point of view is that well dressed up persons meaning a lot as compared to the person who work well. if employees dressed up well everyone wants to talk with them as well as they impress from their behavior and work. others think that they belongs to lead class family and they also attract others from their beautiful nature and character.
for example if any person goes for job interview and they have lot of certificates and good grades but not well personality than they can not impress externals as compared to other who have normal grades but attractive by nature.
In a nutshell, employees should dress formally and also have good quality of work, in that way the organisation achieve their goals and earn more and more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smart
...ll personalized if they dressed up well.Smart dressing enhance the beauty of person a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...o meet them by their glamorous look. secondly others think that quality of work shoul...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d and wants to see own organization high , for that purpose they work hard and jus...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: work
...that purpose they work hard and just do work work work. dressing and smart look does not ...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dressing
...y work hard and just do work work work. dressing and smart look does not matter for them...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...s compared to the person who work well. if employees dressed up well everyone want...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Others
...y impress from their behavior and work. others think that they belongs to lead class f...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...havior and work. others think that they belongs to lead class family and they also attr...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...heir beautiful nature and character. for example if any person goes for job inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91065292096 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39011410411 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501718213058 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1702308319 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20482668608 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098750870207 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310789229045 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117607372552 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519536255215 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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