Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Museums and art galleries are all over the world especially in developed countries, that play vital role in the preservation of culture, history, art and to display valuable things that were extinct from globe.Some of them charge admission fees but other have no charges. I personally believe that the merits of charge admission fees outweigh than the possible drawbacks.
It is admitted that the free entry attracts more people to visit them, but many of them not go on regular bases because they think so it in inexpensive as well as become boring place for them. Recently research showed that their is no difference in number of visitors to museums who charge fees or who does not charge. It is not necessary the free entry increase the fans of historical places.
Secondly, the maintenance of art galleries is cost effective way for this their should be need of funds or money, subsequently government not pay for them than they must be charge admission fees from tourists it will boost the economy of country as well as all expenses of museum attained easily from it. Furthermore, people become more social and historical, want to see different culture that are nearly extinct from nation and they should pay heavy fees for them.
In conclusion, many museums and art galleries does not charge entry fees from visitors by doing this they loss the value by itself, they should charge fees it is substantially necessary for both country as well as government.
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Message: Did you mean 'needed'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93951612903 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59000005524 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6435540342 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.125 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357877613082 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156121251907 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808694497643 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226910261114 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714428311029 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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