Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Since the ancient times, human being always seek the success in their whole lifes. However, this effort brings some advantages and disadvantages. I personally believe that people who want to be successful in their life, they need to take risks and try new aspects of view over the things what they do. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, risk is a choice and we know that our choices help us to achive a goal. Moreover, if you investigate succeed people lives such as big companies owners and enterpreneurs, you can easily see that they are taking risks in part of their decisions. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Two years ago I applied a new company job interview. They want to hire a new pilot for their newest aircraft that they newly bought. They asked me if I was eligiable for this job. However, I didn't know anything about the new plane that the company bought. I took a risk and I said I will be the best pilot for your company to contribute achievements of your companies goal. By this time, I never say a sentece like this. At the end of the interview, they said that they hired me because of I have a self-confident personality. Besides, my risky sentence was the best decision to get the job.

Secondly, sometimes people do not know what is their knowledge how to do well. Moreover, generally it is not enough to make thing as usualy ways. To be brave to try new things. For instance, my brother is a computer engineer in the automobile factory. His job is coding softwares for the automobile engines. He always loads the same software for the all types of engines. One day he changed a script of the software to try how the things go on on the engine. He realized that the new script upgraded horsepower of the engine about 120%. He gained lots of promotion because of the trying a new script on his software.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that trying new things and taking risks will be make us more successfull in our lives. This is because taking risks at the good time and making some unusual things.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
... was eligiable for this job. However, I didnt know anything about the new plane that ...
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Suggestion: because I
...interview, they said that they hired me because of I have a self-confident personality. Besi...
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Suggestion: on
...f the software to try how the things go on on the engine. He realized that the new sc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od time and making some unusual things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49090909091 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55618728559 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516883116883 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4137308387 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8076923077 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265851604388 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646988401816 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815235099192 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159253616885 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393293889272 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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