Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the beginning of the ancient times, education is the key factor of humankind. We created educational centers such as universities and colleges to educate our community. Personally, I believe that we need to share equal money which is called financial support for all types of educational areas. I feel this way for two reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, students need to be in good physical and mental condition to understand the lectures. If a student does not concentrate to listen a lesson, it becomes boring to the student. Educating does not reach its goal. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, when I was at the university, I had a history class. I had problems to concentrate history, as a result I got failed my exams. I talked with my professor about this. He encouraged me to start a group of exercises at the university's gym to prepare my body before every history class. When I started to make the exercises that my professor mentioned before every history class, I had gained strength to concentrate my history lesson. Consequently I passed all of other two history exams.
Secondly, it is important that the students need to socialize in the universities. This will help to get good careers to them in their education life. For instance, my brother was a shy person at the collage. He did not talk at the class and never answered a question. After he attended the course about basketball, he found lots of friends. He found to chance to socialize with his friends by playing basketball. When he went to university, he was the founder of a sport group to encourage the students to find friends.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that universities or collages are need to allocate money as much as equal they can do. This is because the students need to be in good physical contidion and because to socializing is an important factor for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74631268437 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86083381771 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525073746313 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6426734749 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9565217391 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143856320164 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394423537204 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322166842596 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887975042517 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249708436446 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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