In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
To survive in the digital age, the mall will need to reinvent themselves. Currently, many little shops convert to big mall cause of customer. This essay will discuss the reasons in detail why it is a good sign of development.
On the one hand, the country’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP) increase mean economy raising, then people purchase capacity to grow up that time they want going to the large shopping mall. Rose to cities or areas are constructed many multiplexes, big shopping mall. For instance, Meherpur, where my native town, a decade before the majority shopping mall, shore had the size of small but at present, very few are tiny store and market there. Thus, the development means increase buying and selling capability that time since necessity conversion small shop to large shop.
On the other hand, development one of the good reasons for properly organization or architect. When we replace many small to sizable one and the rest of the place make roads, schools, and others. For example, old Dhaka, where was not planning place like huge tiny trade centre, not enough road but in the recent conversion to modernized new Dhaka in where have many large malls, multiplex and others place grow up the playground, road. So, the tiny shop mall covert big mall because of development.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed when nation’s per person capital income increase that time customers travel to the big market and covert big one and rest of place development other civilians’ things. Finally, the time of development has some negative but most of the things positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01132075472 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58070171851 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9541749189 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315970988714 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113350415536 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765656155192 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172925440632 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068200103287 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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