Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living situation of human-being has changed significantly during the last few years because of the industrilization, so youngsters are experiencing different matters than their grandparents. I believe that today's life of young adults are relatively convenient and superficial. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the development of technology facilitated safe working condition, so employees are less exposed to malpractice. Several years ago, mankind were doing most of the task themselves, which means they were subject to various failures in the work place. On the other hand, numerous devices and technologies are accomplishing these jobs, and most workers are doing white-collar tasks. Thereby, they will not suffer from any unexpected things while working. As a result, they will not be injured at their office.
Secondly, the quality of health care has improved, which signifies that individuals are likely to have long life. Previously, doctors were not well-educated; hospitals were remote, compared to today's circumstances. Thus, average life span of mankind was comparatively low because of various diseases that even scholars cannot interpret. Conversely, there are a ton of facility of health care, and scholars are so well-cultivated that most of the ailments can be cured. For these reasons, citizens of any country can have easy access to help if they confront some health issue. Consequently, their well-being is ensured well.
Finally, people can absorb knowledge from the internet readily, and then use the information for important things. Everyone faces divergent kinds of tribulation while trying unfamiliar matters. Few decades ago, individuals were being stuck with trials for a long time when they encounter some difficulty. However, in today's world, people can study solutions to their problem and answers to their questions from the virtual network, without even paying. Thereby, they can handle their trouble by themselves thanks to free consultations on the internet. For instance, last year, I was going to plant some vegetation at my home although I had no background knowledge. Fortunately, I could gained data from world wide web readily, so I managed the matter pretty well. Interestingly, my grandfather said that he failed to grow plant, when he was young, because he was lacking in significant knowledge. He said that if he had access to the internet, stuff would have been straightforward when he was young.
In summation, our predecessors' life condition was more difficult than our life. This is because today's individuals are doing less labour, have satisfactory access to health care, and can find data from the world wide web.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...than their grandparents. I believe that todays life of young adults are relatively con...
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Line 7, column 687, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
...kground knowledge. Fortunately, I could gained data from world wide web readily, so I ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42325581395 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03004961164 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583720930233 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1962646697 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.28 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.48 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885357354059 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235379871631 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275249490669 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521092684278 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138908962105 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.