Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
The ordinance are preponderant matters in life of human being living as group. Personally, I believe that regulations designed for youth is in proper extent and not stern. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, people cannot nurture the teenagers without rules because discipline is the important thing for societal communication of individuals. If regulations which the aged require young people to follow had not existed, adolescences would have been too self-willed, and stop respecting others. In other words, strict ordinance for individual will cause appropriate development in society as whole. For example, Chinese people grew up by accurately following certain rules when they were children. Therefore, they are the most educated and hard working individuals in the world. On the other hand, people who did not follow any significant ordinance in the young age tend to be unsuccessful and lazy during their adulthood.
Secondly, the rules are relatively eased, and became less strict nowadays than. Juveniles have less regulations to follow than the people from the previous years. To be more specific, several years ago, government of my native country, Mongolia, was changed from communism to democracy. Hence, there are relatively less relentless requirement from the society towards the people, especially children. For example, I heard the episodes of my father about following the difficult ordinance of society when he was young, which I dread only by listening about it. I am glad that I was born in the society with relieved rules of the democratic nations. Drawing from experiences of my father and me, the extent of ordinance diminished thanks to the national revolution in many countries including Mongolia that underwent soviet regime.
Finally, In fact, even though there are magnitude of regulations towards the juveniles, the punishment is not severe. Therefore, if youth want to break the moral rules, they can do it without any fear of relentless persecution, which signifies that these ordinance are almost optional for teenagers. For instance, Mongolian regime and parents prohibit young people to smoke, but there is not specific persecution associated with this case. Thus, many boys are smoking because they will not be punished although they break the rule, and expectation of society.
To sum up, I am of the opinion of the regulations for children is not strict, or appropriate. This is because regulations are essential for human being, the extent of rules are reduced, and the retribution is not difficult.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
The ordinance are preponderant matters in life of human b...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun regulations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ss strict nowadays than. Juveniles have less regulations to follow than the people f...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'requirements'?
Suggestion: requirements
...e, there are relatively less relentless requirement from the society towards the people, es...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ordinance' or 'these ordinances'?
Suggestion: this ordinance; these ordinances
...tless persecution, which signifies that these ordinance are almost optional for teenagers. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87351100731 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.342944426 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214483938173 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588909208756 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526797147461 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101940060395 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777805540342 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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