The columns illustrate the information about graduate and postgraduate degree holders who, instead of going into full time job, preferred part time work, further study, voluntary work and remain unemployed after leaving college in the UK in 2008.
Overall, more number of graduate students did not want to go into full-time work than post graduate students.
For graduates in the UK, most of graduate students choosed the further study instead of joining into full time work. 29655 graduate degree holders preferred further study after leaving college. whereas, small number (3500 students)of students did voluntery work after completed college.17735 students were doing part-time work after University education in the UK. Instead of joining full time work about 16235 students want to reminded unemployed.
For postgraduate students in the UK, instead of go into full time work approximately equal number of postgraduate students preferred further study (2725 students) and part time work (2535 students) after leaving college. 1625 post graduate degree holders choose to remained unemployed rather than joining into full time work. Few postgraduates 345 students choosed voluntery work after completed post graduation in the Uk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...gree holders who, instead of going into full time job, preferred part time work, further ...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... of going into full time job, preferred part time work, further study, voluntary work and...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e further study instead of joining into full time work. 29655 graduate degree holders pre...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...ed further study after leaving college. whereas, small number 3500 studentsof students ...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...education in the UK. Instead of joining full time work about 16235 students want to remi...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l time work about 16235 students want to reminded unemployed. For postgraduate s...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... students in the UK, instead of go into full time work approximately equal number of post...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...eferred further study 2725 students and part time work 2535 students after leaving colleg...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...535 students after leaving college. 1625 post graduate degree holders choose to r...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ned unemployed rather than joining into full time work. Few postgraduates 345 students c...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...loyed rather than joining into full time work. Few postgraduates 345 students cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 32.9175257732 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64324324324 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64470749251 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 127.690721649 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454054054054 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2048517324 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39039433318 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206271246449 0.0766984524023 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762978748161 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298909429471 0.12726935374 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219436476202 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 8.71597938144 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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