The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than do research.
it has been a heated debate over the years on the topic that whether professors in college should focus on field research or teaching. some hold the opinion that it is preferable to encourage professors to conduct meaningful research and make breakthroughs. However, from my point of view, educating students contributes more to society than doing pure researches, the merits of which will be illustrated as follows.
students would get solid knowledge by professors' teaching. To state it more clearly, we are living in an age when the "jungle law " and the "survival of the fitness" rule prevail, which means if one college students have a wish to hunt a decent job in the future, he has to be fully prepared in both academic knowledge and practical skills due to the fierce competition. In this situation, solid knowledge in the professional field and well-developed skills obtained from professors constitute a stepping stone to their future success. Undoubtedly, students are more likely to be motivated and learn initiatively if the professor has enough time to communicate with students and care about them. Thus they can have a better understanding of their major. What is more, the professor cannot only instill knowledge in students but also teach them some practical skills which cannot be read from books. Such as management skills, public speaking skills, and to name a few. All these help lay a solid foundation for students' future careers, whether going to hunting a job or going further study. Consequently, there is every reason to believe that the professor plays a significant role in imparting knowledge.
In addition, it is imperative for professors to teach students moral values. students in college are not mature enough since they have not experienced many things in life. Sometimes they can be easily misguided. In this circumstance, necessary moral values teaching from professors are of great importance. On the one hand, valid values like honesty, modesty, and bravery exert a positive effect on their daily lives. Polite students will leave a favorable impression on interviewers and employers, while honest students are more likely to build a strong relationship with others to expand their social network. On the other hand, university students are more likely to go astray without the right values, which poses a threat to social stability and security.
it is true that doing research paving the way for professions to achieve professional success and contributes to the school's fame. we can not overlook the fact that the priority for educators and schools is to cultivate students to be morally sound and literate citizens. As for professors' fame and career, this is not as crucial as education itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while, as for, as to, in addition, such as, it is true, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24943820225 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91634835735 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54606741573 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7653987903 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.181818182 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265665093529 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734860716429 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490909399629 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165128463094 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417915165859 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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