Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Nowadays, there is an increase with a lot of persons being overweight than in past. This essay examines the underlyimg reasons for this issue and the major consequences as a result of this recent trend affecting the society.
Most people are overweight because they simply neglect the habit of exercising. The tremendous benefits of keeping fit cannot be overemphasized. Working out the body is one of the prerequisites for avoiding overweight problems. But, nowadays individuals do not practice exercising, they simply procastinate and this is consequent of their busy lifestyle and work schedule, hence they view exercising as secondary to their daily goals. When this happens individuals build up fats gradually and become overweight. According to the 2019 report by the International Athletics Federation, the principal cause of being overweight is the lack of exercising.
The resultant effect of being overweight is that this can lead to an increase in adverse medical conditions and financial adversity in the economy of the society. This medical conditions include heart diseases, blood cloth, complications of pre-existing medical issues in the body and possibly death. Also, when individuals are overweight, they find it difficult to partake in certain activities such as walking, climbing and runing and are more likely to fall ill and not go to work. This invariably can have a negative effect on the economy in terms of economic prosperity and a huge financial burden on the government to compensate for sick leave.
To sum up, being overweight is a problm in the society and this happens because a lot of individuals do not inculcate the habit of exercising and this can have negative consequences on the society, such as an increase in adverse medical conditions and impact the economy negatively as well as financial implications for the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29292929293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07860494167 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9686988257 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199772943563 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747849455897 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395026804633 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133322762518 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311469785652 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.