Today more people are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
It is widely acknowledged that recently, the number of people who are overweight has increased constantly. In this essay, I will explain some convincing reasons behind this trend and identify several practical problems.
There are many major factors leading to the increase in the number of overweight people, associated with the inadequacy of physical activities and the increasing consumption of unhealthy food. With regard to sedentary lifestyles, with technological development, people nowadays have a wide range of entertainment means, according to their preference, such as playing video games and surfing social platforms. As a result, they do not spend much time participating in physical activities, like going to the gym or cycling, so these individuals have few opportunities to burn their redundant fat and calories, putting them at risk of weight gain. In terms of inappropriate diets, individuals living in the fast-paced world tend to consume fast food because they do not have sufficient time to prepare healthy food. This is likely to increase the likelihood of weight gain as this kind of food contains a great amount of fat and calories.
A number of repercussions should be taken into consideration, affecting individuals and society at large. From an individual standpoint, being overweight can make people more vulnerable to more serious diseases, such as high blood pressure or heart attack, and these individuals are inclined to lose their confidence in communication or interaction due to inferior appearances. With these drawbacks, they have a poor standard of life, compared to ordinary ones. On societal levels, when the number of overweight people witnesses a significant rise, more strains are put on health care systems, exacerbating social challenges. Apart from this, the labor market will have incompetent workforces, reducing work productivity and hindering economic growth.
In conclusion, while there are numerous compelling arguments for the increasing rate of obesity, the negative implications should not be underestimated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...as increased constantly. In this essay, I will explain some convincing reasons be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60702875399 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19444725392 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638977635783 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6887914049 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130457034444 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475904489886 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047494412259 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812231643618 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583980757929 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.