Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, the problem of increasing crime rates is worse than before. Some people believe that the rooted cause of a criminal convict is from their nature. However, from my perspective, most of the huge impact on a person’s behavior is the social environment and family education. In this essay, I will outline these two notions.
First of all, people need to survive in this complicated society; therefore, when an environment its food resources are insufficient, which will cause people to rob others’ food. Similarly, if a society cannot offer its citizens a good job to afford their living cost, which may cause someone to do an illegal thing to get the money, such as robbing bank.
Admittedly, some people could argue that some bad guys might come from their nature. For instance, some children have a steal behavior that stealing money or stuff from other people, even though they do not need to pay any expenditure, just for their desires. Nevertheless, the educational way from parents is another concern to change a person’s behavior. If parents do not show an exact behavior for their children, as a consequence, children will mimic their parents’ criminal behavior, such as child abuse and violent predisposition.
By way of conclusion, I restate my opinion that although people have their own characteristics might decide some negative thinking in consciousness; it is most important that increasing our social benefits for inferior people and improving the educational system from school and family, that can reduce the crime rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85426442307 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3622282167 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204398772348 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769351189517 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669078737598 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127980898341 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358817368647 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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