Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions ?
As a teenager, we are taught to behave well in public and informed with different things that should not be done. However, most teenagers must have experienced puberty, which also consists of a rebel phase and they do not afraid to try atrocious things. Therefore, in some cities, level of youth crimes are increasing rapidly. In the following paragraphs, I will be mentioning some of the reasons and suggest some effective solutions.
Teenagers need enough affection while they grow up especially when puberty phase starts. Because, it is a stage where they need lots of attention and oftenly tend to feel lonesome. Anyhow, some teenagers grow up in a broken home, clearly they will not get enough affection. Therefore, they start to do crime to get others recognition, for example, theft, vandalism, and so on.
If this issue has not been taken care off yet, the levels of youth crime will be increasing within years. All parents do not want their child to be problematic to surrounding, thus, they have to help their children. Parents can start by giving abundant of love and attention to their children, other than that, supervising and guiding also can be a great way, so the children will have a suitable circle of friendship. Enrolling children to prestigious school can also help the children to build a better character.
In conclusion, most of the youth crime are mainly caused by their family condition. Hence, all families should know their children better so any of this will not be happening.
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97637795276 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67418778371 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6284514923 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167979781943 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696124673789 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090060694335 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106370121197 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061736207746 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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