You are a member of {HI organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of thefood and the behaviour of the staff·
Write a letter to the manager of tlte restaurant. Explain what was wrong with the meal and their service, and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that you and your group reh'm to the restaurant.
I am writing to inform you about the last night visit on your restaurant with my friends and I must say that was a disaster.
Let me explain my situation in detail. As you know, we are your regular customer and never try to offend any rules of your place, pays our bills at once and never due any payments. Last night, when me and my friends arrived than there was no waiter to attend. I call them and a delay of 10 min add up in that ramification. Starter are very crispy and scrumptious but main course are not properly cooked and served. They just put all the meal on table and vanished. Chicken curry was mouth watering before but this time it smells like a rotten egg, rice was over-cooked and bread is hard.
Could I suggest you something? Well, I clear my side very well now I want you to ask your staff about all this. Make them understand all the customer happiness rules so that we can come over again without hesitation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I am writing to inform you about the last night visit on your restaurant ...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...in add up in that ramification. Starter are very crispy and scrumptious but main co...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the meal on table and vanished. Chicken curry was mouth watering before but this...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry well now I want you to ask your staff about all this. Make them understand all...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32954545455 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29351290519 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2724929702 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2727272727 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176115669671 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598647063808 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593801408126 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131757663268 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312810628625 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.