2020 has witnessed the outbreak of a rare and new disease has been preying on the minds of thousands of people in the world. Some people complain that this illness has taken the lives of many people, slow down development in many different fields; others claim that disease is an opportunity, thus, the world is getting better.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Follow the current news in the world, the pandemic caused by a dangerous virus is the hottest issue in almost all countries. It is said that human beings are facing the elimination of nature. It is generally argued by some that this sickness has put a negative impact on myriad aspects of life, meanwhile, others believe that the world is going to be better when the disease is over. Personally, I am of the opinion that there are two sides to the issue.
On the one hand, people who support the first view argued that there are certain justifications worth considering. Firstly, many countries are locked down to prevent foreign carriers. In other words, people who are not their citizens, are not allowed to enter these nations. It means there will be no travelers for a long time until the government decides to remove the restrictions. It may cause harm to the tourism, service, and also the retail industry in the country. Secondly, all business activities come to a stop due to the decline of consumer demand for saving money for basic needs during a difficult time. By this, I meant the number of businesses will bankrupt, the number of unemployed will increase sharply, these result in a heavy burden to people.
On the other hand, advocates of the second view are in the belief that this pandemic heals the world’s disease made by humans. To begin with, besides news about the daily record of infections, there is no doubt that we also receive many good reports about the environment. Statistics have revealed that pollution of some big cities such as Beijing, Hanoi, has fell fallen down. Additionally, this pandemic is an alert to humans for considering their health. According to reports from hospitals, infected people who have healthy health have the opportunity to recover fastly after receiving suitable medical treatment.
I believe that these plus-points can be accompanied by an even greater sense of satisfaction compared to those offered by the world is getting better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, i mean, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94082840237 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59435573868 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60650887574 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3043650325 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169318894994 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456010885101 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404719204201 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904478259511 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242700502265 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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