In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout the past few years, humans have faced many health problems. It is generally argued that eating too much fast food is the reason that leads to various diseases. Personally, I in very respect agree with this for the rationale that follows.
To begin with, it is a fact beyond dispute that obesity becomes a popular problem in a lot of countries. By this, I mean people choose fast food for their meals as a quick solution in busy times. No one can deny that this food has a high-fat content, which causes people who usually eat deal with obese problems. A recent survey has shown that the amount of people in developed countries, where the fast-food industry increased, has this disease occupies over 70% of the population. Thus, it is apparent that adding more taxes on this kind of food will reduce the number of obesity cases on people, especially the children.
Another point is that there is no gainsaying that eating fast food in a long period makes people face a lack of nutrients. In other words, people who cook for themselves can decide what they prepare for healthy meals. Statistics have revealed that almost fast food needs to be fried and grilled, which can keep the food for a long time and difficult to be damaged. In consequence, it is evident that the higher price for fast food can encourage people to reduce their spending on it to save costs and protect their health.
To conclude then, I am convinced to assert that imposing a higher tax on fast food is a possible way to decrease the number of people who are suffering health problems with the previous discussions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, thus, i mean, kind of, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69858156028 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43761506495 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7263992568 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388911438487 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134034036541 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596737480639 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239193542788 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288102841348 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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