Dear Mr. Brannagan,
I am writing to apologize for missing the important event that was held yesterday in the auditorium due to an exigency. I was in the office when suddenly I was informed about my aunt's health condition. Due to this, I had to rush to the hospital to visit her.
Let me explain in more detail. My aunt has been hospitalized and needs immediate treatment. As I am the only close relative on my aunt in this city, I had to be there for her admission and paperwork. Due to her unstable medical condition from last two years, she has been kept in I.C.U for critical observation for next few days.
I spoke with Anne, late afternoon, yesterday about the event. And she would be more than happy to provide me the gist of the event. Additionally, I would provide my insights on the event by latest this weekend.
I hope you would excuse me for being absent.
Yours sincerely,
Maheem Bhatia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: U
...ast two years, she has been kept in I.C.U for critical observation for next few d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60975609756 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60016473189 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4020348235 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 4.34317383033 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267461284487 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851771203252 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687227739709 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144279321321 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517845593519 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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