Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Never have societal liabilities gone as viral as they do now. It is argued by some that tax collected from society members is in itself an immense help offered to the community, yet, others contradict by stating that they should be held accountable for more contribution besides taxes. In this essay below, I will elaborate both ideas prior to presenting my own perspective.
To commence with, predicaments of people make it unfeasible for them to financially support the society they dwell in. For example, most people prioritize their families in terms of money provision and nourishment and in case of financial meltdown, even the possibility of paying taxes plummets. The main reason for that is when people are in dire straits, they find it arduous to manage their monetary resources and the tight budget they own will agonize them. Consequently, they may be bound to encounter challenging issues pertaining to money, if they allocate more of it to the community. So, people should not be held responsible for making more contributions to the society, since they may fail to even manage their own family budget.
However, residents of a country are in charge of not only paying taxes for a tremendous contribution but also humane traits make up a well-constructed community as well. In other words, unimaginable fact is that it is dull and inhumane not to be supportive to the neighborhood when a person is not at a loss to do so. While the life in cities becomes monotonous to live in, the paid taxes cannot make the city life curiosity-elevating, in the sense that people lack common manners to have an interaction with each other. Furthermore, sympathy is considered to be high on the agenda of the individuals when pondering on helping the society. This enlightens the way people behave in and respect the community they are a part of.
In conclusion, even though society members assist the society by paying taxes, the belief is that they are capable of doing more to make it a better place to exist in. Ergo, I believe that people can do more than paying taxes to help the society in the effort to flourish. It is predicted that if all members of the society try to help their society fervently, it will surely develop by leaps and bounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83979328165 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86737422726 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537467700258 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2965719651 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312067358046 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100448942507 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715725029135 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194534505274 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593835420691 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.