Some people think that cooking food at home is wastage of time. They think that the fast food restaurants have made modern living easy and less stressful. To what extent do you agree?
New dimensions are influencing the preparations of foods. There is a view that preparing meals at home consumes too much time. People feel that establishments which do takeaways can fulfil this need adequately and thereby reduce stress. Let us analyse this matter further to deepen our understanding.
Admittedly, when both husband and wife are working, they tend to eat outside than cooking at home. Ready-made food gives convenience and freedom to enjoy life for many busy families. For instance, eating in a fancy restaurant can greatly improve the quality of family time and bonding between members as everybody can enjoy the atmosphere. In contrast, if an exhausted mother to cook at home after work, it would instil the stress and anger in the home destroying the happy mood of everybody.
Nevertheless, ready-made foods are unhealthier compared to homemade food. In fact, the habit of eating outside regularly can detrimentally affect health. Therefore, people should find better alternatives to reduce stress and efficient ways to cook at home. To elaborate, getting up a bit early every morning gives plenty of time and using modern electronic kitchen appliances such as microwave cookers, dishwashers can drastically reduce the cooking time.
Furthermore, by making home cooking as a fun activity, family members can enjoy the kitchen time resulting in a healthy meal with quality time. In addition, cooking can be used as a good stress reliever which is recommended by many doctors.
To recapitulate, despite the convenience provides by fast food outlets, the long term health issues are adverse. Therefore, I believe people should adhere to new dimensions of home cooking by changing their habits and using modern technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, therefore, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90099783346 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0901480044 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261097617963 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804656234512 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492470112391 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141911348411 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389143815145 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.