Since time immemorial women's role is limited to bring up the child and daily routines such as house chores, cooking to name but a few. While some are of the opinion that women's role should be in the household, a significant majority of experts are stating that both males and females have to share the workload. I think that women have equal rights along with men and should do whatever she wants to be.
Both historians and sociologists are claiming that woman has some special qualities the separates from men. The first thing to be highlighted is that they are generally both warm-hearted and affectionate. To elaborate this, women naturally have a greater amount of patience which makes them attractive to not only the toddlers but also to the family. Moreover, female leads used to be head of the culinary department while men tended to be heads of the families. this tradition continued for a long time as society was patriarchal.
However, due to the revolutions in both culture and traditions in society, roles have been changing constantly. The world witnessed women empowerment in a variety of fields such as marketing, software to name but a few. Moreover, psychologists are claiming that women are good at multitasking, thus, many companies are preferring women over men for some of the positions. So, it is inevitable for men to share household activities with their wives.
To conclude, in my opinion, although women are considered to be best for house caring and bringing up the child, they should be allowed to pursue their dreams and lead the life whatever they wanted to be. positions. So, it is inevitable for men to share home-related activities with their wives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96830985915 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79658829115 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9575487908 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169835767104 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608103776286 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433392979062 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111607231035 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245978622971 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.