In recent years, it is increasingly common for many people living in the city centers, this issue may cause big trouble and there are some causes and several viable solutions will be outlined in my essay.
Too many people gathering in the city centers will lead to the reduction of life quality, for example, the streets are always jammed on rush hours and it takes a long time to move, besides, a city may lack the necessary services like schools, hospitals; In case when people go to the hospital who may not get adequate treatment.
The most glaring cause of this overpopulation in urban centers is that there was a large number of industrial zones, restaurants, shops that are located in the city center. Therefore, they attract many employees, those will choose their habitat near the center for the convenience of their moving. Another cause is that the land fund of the suburban area has decreased sharply. A large number of hectare farmland vanished to make space for resorts, golf sites, etc. The farmer has no land to crop thus they manage to move to the city centers to find another job.
Although there are some drawbacks of overpopulation in urban. In my opinion, there are some possible solutions to tackle this issue. Firstly, the government and enterprises should negotiate to find suitable areas to built the plants where far from the city center, these enterprises will be suffered the lower tax compare to others locating in the city center. Secondly, the owners of the resort should employ the famers who lose their land for resort projects as the employees. Lastly, the government must be limited to the increasing of the resorts, golf sites which cause the reduction of the cropland fund.
In conclusion, the overpopulation in city centers is still big trouble for each nation, there are some viable solutions to deal with this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'many employees'.
Suggestion: many employees
... cities center. Therefore, they attract many employee, those will chose their habitat near th...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
... they attract many employee, those will chose their habitat near the center for conve...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... of surburban area is decrease sharply. A large number of hectare farmland vanished make space f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arge number of hectare farmland vanished make space for resorts, golf sites, etc....
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to the city center to find another job. Although there are some drawbacks of this issue....
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opinion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many opinions'.
Suggestion: many opinions
...re are some drawbacks of this issue. In many opinion, there are some posible solutions to ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91558441558 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50051436773 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6421862633 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182341399263 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726860103891 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545137551846 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10951902317 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326738371686 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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