The given table shows data about the registration of five types of vehicles in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
It is clearly that the number of registered vehicles in all the five categories increased over the period shown, with the figures for motorcycles had the most significant upswing. In addition, passenger vehicles are the most common mode of transportation among the five types.
In 2010, 11,800,000 registered passenger vehicles in Australia far eclipsed the other number of commercial vehicle (2,300,000), motorcycles (540,000), heavy trucks (384,000) and light trucks with the lowest level (106,000).
In 2014, the number of registered vehicles all went up, with the highest growth position was sill belonged to passenger vehicles ( 13,000,000 ) while the lowest one was light trucks (131,000). On the other hand, during this period, motorcycles and light trucks increased expressively in terms of percent, at 30.8% and 23.5%, while the others categories show a little bit less rises, 10.2% for passenger vehicles, 17.4% for commercial vehicles and 8.3% for heavy trucks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the figures for motorcycles had the most significant upswing. In addition, passen...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... trucks with the lowest level 106,000. In 2014, the number of registered vehicles...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was sill belonged to passenger vehicles 13,000,000 while the lowest one was lig...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...longed to passenger vehicles 13,000,000 while the lowest one was light trucks 13...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
....5%, while the others categories show a little bit less rises, 10.2% for passenger vehicle...
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Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun rises is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the others categories show a little bit less rises, 10.2% for passenger vehicles, 1...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess rises, 10.2% for passenger vehicles, 17.4% for commercial vehicles and 8.3% f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72457843792 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0382393805 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245977202279 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161406453043 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168619927444 0.0843802449381 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213818973058 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184990850469 0.0819641961636 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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