Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to enquire information about getting both the financial loan and its prerequisites.
My name is Rakesh Sharma and I have been living in this area for 10 years. I would like to install a micro-enterprise that is primarily focused on not only import but also export computer peripherals to the vendors in the local area. To initiate the process, I would have to invest a great deal of amount to fetch a range of products including laptops, keyboards, and Hard disks to name but a few. For the same reason, I would like to take a loan worth twenty-five hundred thousand from your financial institution.
If I got the amount that I need, although it is a huge amount, I could pay it in two years. However, obviously, I would go for installments. I hope this option is available for the candidates who are applying for the credit. If everything is fine, please approach me either calling on my phone or replying to this letter.
I look forward to your reply. Please feel free to approach me if you need more information.
Yours sincerely,
Rakesh Sharma
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68205128205 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83704247297 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0326103735 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118199855743 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453241530362 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498106365009 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802886396841 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053259640829 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68205128205 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83704247297 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0326103735 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118199855743 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453241530362 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498106365009 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802886396841 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053259640829 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.