Although some people consider their appearances as the essence of the youth, I believe the youth are the symbol of challenging spirit. Based on my definition of the youth, I think the younger have more flexible mindsets and energy than older people do, which helps the youth to challenge themselves. Considering those advantages of the youth, I agree with the following statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do because they are more likely to open to try new things.
First, I think younger people are more open to learning new things compared to older people. Since the youth have less knowledge and self-consciousness than the elderly do, the youth are not constricted by prejudice and their own belief. For example, the children grow through trying new things and making mistakes. With the aids of their parents, they are not afraid of the risk of challenging themselves. However, as you get older, you feel more fear of making mistakes because they would feel shame in case they fail. Free from those restrictions, young people can enjoy trying new things so that they can develop their skills and knowledge.
Second, younger people tend to have more energy than older people do, which encourages the youth to challenge themselves. For example, when I was a high school student, I was able to stay up all night with friends to study for exams. However, now my body feels tired even before midnight, which sups my motivation to study at night. Likewise, if you have more energy, you will more likely to have a positive mindset to trust in your potential and to enjoy challenging yourself.
Third, I believe the young spirit depends on whether you have kept moving forward to improve themselves. Even though the youth who do not have such a challenging spirit, they cannot take their advantage to enjoy their livings. Since I know many elderlies who continue to learn new things to improve themselves, I believe that age does not matter to enjoy their own life as long as you have such youthful spirits.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that the youth enjoy life more than older people do because the youth have more open minds and energy that drive them to try new things to improve themselves. However, it is important to consider that age does not necessarily limit their potentials to develop but the mindset does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, second, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85856079404 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51440566271 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454094292804 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.612359528 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.777777778 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379393854108 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133357058263 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13793925218 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254311410812 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923530367312 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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