As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Thanks to the technology breakthrough in medical domain, humans are expected to live longer than ever before. Intensive debates are sparked regarding this phenomenon and its impact on both personal level and the society.
Longer life expectancy has its merit. If people were to live longer, they would acquire and accumulate more knowledge, which is a valuable resource and reserve for the society that introduce productivity uplift. For example, a human with 75-year life expectancy has a five year advantage in learning and provisioning knowledge than who only stays at this world for 70 years. In addition, further down to a micro level, for individuals, they are granted additional time that could be spent for anything. For instance, couples could save up their wages for an additional year and finally kick off a more luxurious travel, without limited by age.
Having said that, such phenomenon is not without drawbacks. Naturally human’s physical condition worsens as age develops. As a result, additional medical cost will be incurred, with resources allocated to the elderlies. At a society level, the expense could be unimaginable. As for individuals, more time will be dedicated to taking care of their parents. Once they become old and not self-sustainable, they will suffer for more year, trapped in non-functional bodies.
From my perspective, longer life expectancy would be commonly considered a good indicator of the society if people were enjoy less and contribute more. After all, the disadvantages are not unbearable and the advantages have huge potentials.
In conclusion, longer life expectancy is a double-sided sword for both individuals and the society. Not only do they benefit from additional time that can be used for entertainment and productivity, but also do they suffer from additional burden introduced. However, people should welcome such development.
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Suggestion:
...nd the advantages have huge potentials. In conclusion, longer life expectancy is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, after all, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42033898305 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04761410582 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7076296425 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240091929473 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728320761282 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400807032255 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125831594363 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495796813096 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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