The use of illegal drugs, such as heroin and cocaine, are becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?
Nowadays, many people utilize forbidden drugs, such as heroin or cocaine, this alarming problem is turning into widespread in nations. There are various consequences contributed to drug use and there are also some measures taken to eliminate this social evil.
Drug abuse has provoke some negative influences on society. Firstly, the drug use carries potential health risks to addicts who have to squander great amount of money on pharmacy and hospital. Moreover, the overuse of banned drugs may lead to life-threatening condition, even death. In Vietnam, there was a film which accuse and warn people of the used drug danger. Secondly, drug addicts will suffer from illusion necessitated by drug, and cannot control their behaviors such as violence, which leads to turn to crime.
It is essential that some solutions are implemented to reduce this situation. Education for raising awareness is the top priority for youngsters to avoid this evil and abide by the rules of national and local authorities. Furthermore, government should take strong measures to be tough on crime to drug trafficking, which maybe are a large amount of money on punishment and serving a prison sentence. In addition, the drug users should be labour re-educated and given a chance of rehabilitation and instructed how to become useful member of community.
In conclusion, because the drug addiction is the precursor of some unexpected outcomes, government should introduce restrictions to punish wrongdoers. Although it is difficult to eliminate the drug use, we still take step to prevent from this social evil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'provoked'.
Suggestion: provoked
...ate this social evil. Drug abuse has provoke some negative influences on society. Fi...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'laboured'?
Suggestion: laboured
.... In addition, the drug users should be labour re-educated and given a chance of rehab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35714285714 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90803441299 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3642169747 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255162576169 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948210952719 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482226562246 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154587800221 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360685563928 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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