You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think your current place of residence is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague.
Explain why you are shifting out
Describe your accommodation
Explain why it is suitable for your friend
Dear Naina,
I hope you and your family are doing great. As you know that i have been living in Delhi from the last few years, and it has really been a great experience staying in this paying guest facility, where most of the guests came from the English speaking countries to work here.
I am writing this to you to inform you that i am planning to move out next month, as i got transfer to Bangalore due to my recent promotion. Further, I got to know that since you have also got an internal transfer from The United State to New Delhi within the organization, this place would be a perfect area for you to stay, as it would be more convenient for you to live with other English speaking people since you are more comfortable communicating in English, and your Hindi is not really that fluent.
If you want, i can introduce you with my landlord . He is a quite generous and understanding person, would help you a lot during your movement.
Let me know if you need any further information regarding this occupancy. I would certainly arrange it for you.
Best regards
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writing this to you to inform you that i am planning to move out next month, as ...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... am planning to move out next month, as i got transfer to Bangalore due to my rec...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...not really that fluent. If you want, i can introduce you with my landlord . He...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nt, i can introduce you with my landlord . He is a quite generous and understandin...
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge it for you. Best regards Harpreet
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56852791878 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52666627093 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.753498614 44.8134815571 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298610215127 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127372367168 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705601856692 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184753252676 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580967103746 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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