Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made him less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is important to consider how technology has changed the way people live. While many consider that the people have become more socially active as a result of these advancements, others have a contradictory view on this matter. I support the former view and discuss my opinions in this essay further.
To begin with, the advocates of the latter view might argue that technology breakthroughs have dramatically reduced a face to face interaction amongst individuals. This is because they are often glued to their electronic devices like mobile phones and personal computers rather than having a physical meeting with their friends and family. For example, an individual, nowadays, is active on social media, and make thousands of friends virtually, however, they hardly know each other personally, and have real communication. If there were no internet or smart devices developed, people would often participate more in outdoor activities and meet real friends, unlike social media, where people make friends just to showoff.
Nevertheless, in my opinion, technological elevation such as, the internet that has enabled a connection amongst people from different parts of the world. That said, it has provided a platform for people from diverse cultures and history, where they can openly post their views and emotions online and share with a vast audience.
Twitter and Facebook are two perfect examples of such a mediator platform. Further, through the world-wide-web, individuals can find friends with similar interests on a few clicks. Even, it made it effortless for an introvert person as well to connect with likewise people around the world. Thus, this trend has made many individuals more social.
In conclusion, although technology evolution has impacted personal interaction and original friendship negatively, in my opinion, it has paved the way for global communication and provided a commonplace to locate companion with common taste and predispositions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51803278689 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97041580621 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1419642787 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216061271328 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771537368104 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613237774594 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115566113094 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553100161271 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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