Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
These days, people are spending less time on their hobbies. There is a reason for this practice. In my opinion, I believe spending no time to pursue leisure activities is disadvantageous to both people and the society.
Firstly, people are unable to spare time for leisure activities because of a hectic work schedule at their offices. In other words, People are compelled to work for longer hours owing to though competition at work. Competition at work pushes them to work hard in order to outdo their colleagues and secure their positions at work. Therefore, people do not have enough time to spare and spend on their hobbies.
This practice negatively impact people's' well-being. After a long day at work, when people are not left with much time to be spent on their hobbies, they are more likely to develop psychological disorders like depression and anxiety. In other words, hobbies help people to channelize their frustration constructively, helps to relieve stress of their minds, and keep them calm and happy. For instance, after a long busy day at work, I like to go out for long walks while listening to the music at same time. this practice helps me to forget worries at work, rejuvenate me, and better prepare myself for the next day at work. When people of a society are not happy psychologically, they cannot contribute to the progress of that society in any way.
In conclusion,both hectic work schedule and though competition at work do not allow people to spare time for their hobbies. In my opinion, this practice has detrimental effects on the for the well-being of individuals and to the progress of a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89928057554 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79403565964 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492805755396 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7638711539 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146032280563 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717974241619 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430077645315 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114055484133 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354829040426 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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