You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter;
1) Explain what you like about the cafeteria.
2)Say what is wrong with it.
3) Suggest how it could be improved.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to give my feedback about our college's cafeteria.
As for what I love about the canteen, there are basically two great benefits that it offers us. First, the food is quite cheap. it is reasonable and affordable to all students. Secondly, the cafeteria is located within the campus. so it is extremely convenient for busy students with short breaks at noon.
In terms of food quality and space, there are some problems that need considering. The dishes stay the same every day, and seem monotonous. Moreover, in rush hour, since there are a lot of students, we face a shortage of seats and we sometimes need to wait quite a while to get seated.
Therefore, I suggest the following two measures for improvement. you may adjust the price as well as the quality of food. students certainly do not mind paying a bit more for various and more delicious food containing sufficient nutrition. Regarding the space, we would reccommend you invest more money to purchase new tables and chairs. Likewise, you might enlarge the dining space by using the open yard in front of the cafeteria. I believe this provides enough seats and at the same time students can enjoy their meals in a fresher place, seeing more beautiful views.
I sincerely enquire you to look at the issue. Thank you so much.
Best regards,
Vinh Chau
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79914529915 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56129832412 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5680967466 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3888888889 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236944111446 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613947426988 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512146208258 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133010272185 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533437403139 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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