You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.
Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter,
explain what you like about the cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how it could be improved
Dear sir,
I am Sakshi, an engineering student at your college writing this letter to complain about the cafeteria in the strongest terms. But before this I want to shed light on the areas which are really appreciate able for example there are loads of amenities for the tutees such as there are lots of tables for them where they can sit and enjoy their meals apart from this it is very neat and tidy as well which makes the place more alluring for the visitors to come and to eat in the college cafeteria. besides that, the most amazing aspect is that the sections for boys and girls is different.
On the negative side I just want to describe that our college canteen is lacking behind in providing the range of meals for the customers due to which we get bored of some dishes.Because of which we are reluctant sometimes to go there and prefer to move outside to have some meals.Sometimes we are also served with not so fresh food.
Hence I am writing this letter on the behalf of many students that the menu needs to be reviewed And if some dishes are added then it will be really appreciable.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Priya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
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Suggestion: Besides
...me and to eat in the college cafeteria. besides that, the most amazing aspect is that t...
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Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...s for the customers due to which we get bored of some dishes.Because of which we are rel...
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Suggestion: Because
...ue to which we get bored of some dishes.Because of which we are reluctant sometimes to ...
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Suggestion: Sometimes
...efer to move outside to have some meals.Sometimes we are also served with not so fresh fo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...re also served with not so fresh food. Hence I am writing this letter on the behalf ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, look, really, so, then, well, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38541238347 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.878698297 44.8134815571 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.285714286 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 16.8248392259 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 4.34317383033 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186639360095 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898828838843 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652046854133 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992592773264 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295585174589 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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