With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the number of overweight residents are significantly increase in today’s society. Some people argue that making sport-related subject as a compulsory module on all courses degree could be an ideal solution to cope with this urgent problem. From my point of view, I totally agree with this idea.
On the one hand, universities are not the only institution could tackle this serious problem. The local authorities also have a responsibility of raising the awareness of their dwellers about the risk of putting on weight too much. By running some campaigns in order to inform people about the negative consequences of it, that could contribute greatly to the decrease of overweight population. Moreover, the government could also adopt policies to rise the taxes on all foods with a high fat and sugar. As a result, the consumption of this unhealthy food would noticeably fall due to its extravagant price.
On the other hand, universities play a vital role in helping their students prevent overweight. If they make a sport compulsory module on all degree courses, that would allow their leaners to burn off a large amount of fat and calories. As a result, students would be able to keep fit and stay in good shape. Moreover, this type of class could help students avoid sedentary lifestyle, which is detrimental to their health and strengthen their immune system. Hence, with better health, graduates could absorb knowledge easier, latter result in higher academic performances or records.
In conclusion, although the government could tackle with this problem throughout some reasonable policies, I still believe that making sport becomes a compulsory subject in universities is a one of the best solution that should be conducted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17957746479 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86583163742 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7663434983 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250543032231 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788935358135 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088060184479 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16867715935 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945140842858 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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